I liked this books content a lot. It was thoroughly enjoyable. There were a lot of mistakes that should have been edited out, just like the other two. I wouldn't have seen these if it wasn't for some very annoying parts of the book. I still docked a star for editing, because I believe it is a vital part of writing and good editors need work just as much as good authors. The narrator again added, subtracted or even changed words to make some parts make sense, not even sure if he realized it was h...

So many typos.I don't know if they thought that they would publish this without an editor and have the Kindle readers edit it, but this is awful. There are SO MANY TYPOS. I am 10% in and have already reported at least 15. And these aren't like a missing comma, but words are in there wrong, there's extra words, and my daughter who is further along than me said there is one section that says, "delete for Kindle book" in the actual text. Also the point of view of this book is not consistent with th...

This has been a painful read. Out of respect for how much I've loved the first two books I still give it three stars, and I will read the next one coming out later this year. However, it will have to be significantly better than this one for me to continue after that.The reason why I describe this experience as painful is two-fold.One of the reasons is the EXTENSIVE spelling mistakes found on nearly every single page. There was even a part where the author forgot to remove a line stating "for au...

For much of this book I was not engaged. It's difficult to write fight scenes while making them both understandable and interesting. In this case, the fight scenes were dull affairs. And there were so many of them we were forced to experience. It didn't help that almost every time some magic ability was used, its entire spec-sheet was listed. I prefer Robert Jordan's approach, where evocative fighting-style names are used, (E.g. Crane spreads its wings), leaving the details to the reader's imagi...

8 + hours of skill rehash, unbelievable levels of it. Subplots that mean nothing. wasting hours on back story secondary characters, no new adventures whatsoever, just visiting the same old place again. Jason is basically in the same back woods town that's not part of the greater community of the world. Epic plot armor for the mc. Repetitiveness during most of the book. And seriously leaving iron / bronze rankers to the fate of the world? What the HELL is rest of these supposed power house famili...

While I still enjoyed the book overall, my enthusiasm for this series has deflated quite a bit. There are a variety of reasons for this, some are specific to me while others are evidently not, as evidenced by multiple lukewarm reviews by other fans of the series.There were a lot of typos and grammar mistakes in this book. This was even after the update that corrected the most grievous errors. It might not bother everyone, but the issues were prevalent enough to be a distraction and this book pro...

Endless battles - months worth.Endless stats - which given now and then are OK but I think these are given way too often for a game *nobody will ever get to play*.Also, there is some weird stuff. "Hey - we're going to a different plane of existence to root out a bad guy." Cool. I would think they'd be gone for a week or two a month on the outside. No. They are gone for MONTHS. None of the MC's high power friends seem to have any interest in checking to see if they are OK or anything. Did I miss

This volume has more fight scenes and stats than the previous two, and less sociopolitical intrigue. But there's a good setup for the next in the series.

Rating 4.0 stars I really am enjoying this series. There are some things that could be better but they haven't reached the point of being annoying yet. The grand fight scenes are a little too much. The descriptions of the powers during combat are very long and detract from the actual fighting. You want those descriptions to add to the suspense of fighting not take away from it. The characters are well written and the story is engaging. The only other issue is that the last 4 hours of the audiobo...

Not bad but my least favorite so far.I have the unfortunate tendency to rate a book based on how it ended and unfortunately I didn’t really like the ending of this book. I really find an author who likes to in the books with cliffhangers to be somewhat distasteful especially if you have to wait a year or more before the next book. Most of this book was very well written and I really enjoyed it but I’m beginning to suspect that the main characters becoming less important to the story. We will jus...

Just to address the elephant in the room- There are a ton of errors in this book. Misspellings, grammatical errors, run-on sentences, and there was even a point where there were notations like {Clive says this- Take this out for the Audio Book] [Jason says this. Take this out for the audio book} {Neil says this - take this out for the audio book}. Definitely could have used a proof reader or two, and an editor to go over it one last time. This seems rushedThat said, if you can get past the error...

I have enjoyed this series to date but this last book was ... something. It's like there was a school assignment and the deadline arrived and everything was turned in out of order. Stuff was turned in that should have been turned in with the previous assignment, along with stuff that hadn't really been proofread, along with stuff for the next assignment, but all out of order with a giant binder clip. I'm looking forward to reading the next book, if only to work out the 8 EPILOGUES of this one. I...

Unexpected heroes aboundFirst off, let me forewarn anyone going into this book that the writing has changed from the first 2 books. Which is why I'm rating this as 4 stars instead of 5. The book is still great for story, and the characters are still well written. However the humor and general feel were left a bit lacking to me. Throughout the book there are heav themes, which could attest to the change. Jason really does a lot of growing through the book, coming to terms with how he has acted in...

Wow! This series just gets better and better with each book! Jason and his team don't rest on their laurels after winning the Reaper contest (see bk2), oh no, they utilize the prizes received to the absolute Max, in order to build up all of their strengths, starting with their weakest and most vulnerable member!When Jason, still only an iron ranker, single-handedly takes on a silver rank monster, holding it at bay 'til his team arrives, the tides begin to turn in their favorBy this time the Buil...

Review of books 1-4: https://fanfiaddict.com/review-he-who...One of the best series, I’ve ever read irrespective of genre! And one of my most re-read series too! I simply cannot wax eloquent anymore regarding this series. It’s simply brilliance in bound words!Note: Though this book is advertised as LitRPG and has “some” game elements, I believe this leans more towards Progression Fantasy. The game elements are kept to bare minimum and specific to it’s purpose and we are not subject to detailed a...